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Tue, 05/08/2007 - 22:41 — Death Rattle
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Heya Everybody! Just dropping in to introduce myself and let everyone know about my comic Death-Rattle! If you'd like, then feel free to check us out at www.deathrattle.org I'm sure you'll find something you like! Even if you don't, let us know what you think in either the Shout-Box or in the Forums. Thanks in advance!

Wed, 05/09/2007 - 21:30 — Death Rattle
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While I agree that the site

While I agree that the site still needs alot of work I wasn't thinking that navigation was posing such a problem... Stan is hanging in the tree by his nuts because he was being a dumbass at practice. (It can happen) Anyways, just stick with the rest of the series and I'm sure you'll get some laughs! (I should be posting #17 tomorrow) Thanks for the review by the way!

Wed, 05/09/2007 - 07:07 — Compugasm
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Painful Navigating

Anime isn't my style, but your site needs a lot of work. It shouldn't be a guessing game on how to navigate your site. It's inconsistent, and way to small. I couldn't figure out how to get to the first strip. Personally, I think your comic should begin with panels 1 and 2 from strip number one, and then skip right to strip #4.

The idea is to use the establishing shot from the exterior of the house, then go inside and get right to who does what in the band. Strip #4 is also an example where the pacing of the story needs fixing. Panel 5 has way to much dialog and detail. Then suddenly a guy is hanging in a tree by his nuts.... what??? How'd he get there?

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