Krillon Kallane Webcomic Launch

havehope's picture

Hey people, first post here. This is just to announce that Krillon Kallane has been up for a week and is getting some good traffic. Just to invite people to read this comic that seeks to look and feel different from other webcomics.

Anyways, this is the link www.krillonkallane.smackjeeves.com

and the official site www.geocities.com/krillonekallane

 

Feedback would be much appreciated

thanks

havehope's picture

thanks man, but had

thanks man, but had difficulties getting onto comic genesis. but cheers anyway.
The William G's picture

My only advice

My only advice is to get off of geoshitties ASAP. I think you'd thrive at Comic Genesis, and you don't have to worry about moderately sized links shutting your site down for the day.


havehope's picture

Thanks a lot, buddy! Â

Thanks a lot, buddy!

 

DanTheRobot's picture

Yeah, I went to the

Yeah, I went to the Geocities site (which is a lot cleaner by the way) and it was very nice. I read through all three of your storylines. Your colors are very well done, in the other setup when there were other objects floating around it was a bit confusing, but now with just the black background it was very clear as to what was going on. One suggestion I would make though is that in your strips on the Geocities page there isn't a previous or a home button. Not everyone will take the time to go back (many will cmd W it). I think you should either have the strip run into the next one or at least give us a home button.

 

 

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havehope's picture

Aaah yes, that will be

Aaah yes, that will be fixed. Thanks for telling us that. And yes, you are not supposed to know too much about Kallane in the beginning, you progressively know more and more as the issues roll on.
DanTheRobot's picture

Well, I read through a good

Well, I read through a good chunk of your comic, it was a bit tough to follow since you hand-draw each character every day and the colors would change. Other than that it seemed like a pretty cool Action Adventure strip. I would have liked to get a bit more character development out though, I understand the Krillone character is the hero, but I don't know anything about him, the same with the people he kills indiscriminately ((chortle)). Another thing I had noticed was that there is a hit counter in the middle of the page that sometimes gets in the way of the strip. That might want to be fixed so we can see the strip. http://www.DantheRobot.com

 

 

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