I did this as a sort of warm-up for a much longer thing I'm working on. It's a story taken from this book I'm reading (Written by a totally different Eric Burns.) Anyway you can read Europe’s First Smoker here. It ends kind of abruptly, but so did the man in question. I'm entertaining making an Infinite Canvas version. Would anyone prefer that?
Comments
I liked it
As is it's very sharp. I thought you structured it very well.
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Xaviar Xerexes
Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Gnaw.
Thank you sir!
IC?
I don't think Infinite Canvas would add anything to the story.
It's a simple linear narrative, works just fine the way it is.
I like the sketchy pencil-lines.
Thanks Derik, The IC would
Good Read
And entertaining! Thanks!
Jose aka Crying Macho Man