New comic- "Europe's First Smoker"

nvonflue's picture

I did this as a sort of warm-up for a much longer thing I'm working on. It's a story taken from this book I'm reading (Written by a totally different Eric Burns.) Anyway you can read Europe’s First Smoker here. It ends kind of abruptly, but so did the man in question. I'm entertaining making an Infinite Canvas version. Would anyone prefer that?

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xerexes's picture

I liked it

As is it's very sharp. I thought you structured it very well.

 

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nvonflue's picture

Thank you sir!

Thank you sir!
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derikb's picture

IC?

I don't think Infinite Canvas would add anything to the story.
It's a simple linear narrative, works just fine the way it is.

I like the sketchy pencil-lines.

 

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nvonflue's picture

Thanks Derik, The IC would

Thanks Derik, The IC would really be for those who don't care for scrolling. But I'm with you, it wouldn't add much.
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Crying Macho Man's picture

Good Read

And entertaining! Thanks!

Jose aka Crying Macho Man

Jose aka Crying Macho Man