Commotion focuses primarily on two particular teams - the local favorites for the title, 'Team Psyclone', and the wandering team 'The Platinum Mark', whose captain Dynamite enters the scene by arriving in Hawaii and immediately - well, what do you expect? - going to the local arcade and meeting Picture Me, one of the more inflammatory members of Team Psyclone. After the latter's rather stubborn refusal to relinquish the arcade machine upon losing, the two face off in a brief competition where, not only does Dynamite beat Picture Me, but he also beats Team Psyclone's captain Cyber, leaving the team angry. They become angrier still when the Platinum Mark then proceed to (albeit 'accidentally') remove their highscores from the machine. Two weeks later, with barely a few days left until the tournament, the two teams begin to clash again, and from here the webcomic takes us through the events leading up to the tourney.
When it comes to the manga style, Yukon Makoto knows her stuff, having worked on a number of professional projects including Shonen Jump (as a letterer and translator). The art is well-drawn, if slightly loose-lined, with a slight bent towards characters and foreground rather than background, and a fair whack of rough pencil-work left in. Rather than mar the work, however, this all comes together to give each page a rather unique effect. As stated, there's often a lack of a detailed background – or indeed any background at all – though the same rough pencil lines can often help to shape one. To compensate, there are often some fantastic portrait or full-body pictures of the cast, making some sections look more like an art gallery than a comic. Ultimately, the happy-go-lucky feel of the plot and most of the characters continues in the art, leaving the pages breathing with a light air and wafting easy on the eyes.ComixTalk is not responsible for comments, blog and forum posts. News and ComixTalk Magazine articles are copyright by their respective authors.
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Re: The 10kCommotion by Yukon Makoto, reviewed by Stelas
Feel free to suggest some...
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Re: The 10kCommotion by Yukon Makoto, reviewed by Stelas
Is this the same comic that did a whole plot arc revolving around some not-so-great reviews the comic received and begging readers to IM the creator to fluff her ego?
I'm afraid I have to disagree with your review on just about all counts. 10K Commotion is just another manga-wannabe strip with manga-wannabe characters and a manga-wannabe plot. The art's sort of cute, but that's about all it has going for it. In a nutshell, there's absolutely nothing original about this strip. We've seen this a million times--done better, no less.
How about finding some truly original comics to review here?
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